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Monday, March 01, 2010

Mon, Mar 1, 2010

Mon, Mar 1, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & QUIZ
2. Check analysis practice

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & QUIZ
2. Analysis practice

Pd 2
AR QUIZ DEADLINE TODAY
1. If you have your essay ready for editing, give it to people to read. Write the legend in top right corner: names of editors, in different colors, & use color for editing marks + ? more. Hand it in tomorrow with final draft and outlines.
HW: Final draft, rough draft, final outline, rough outline due Tues

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and QUIZ
2. Handouts for quoting and writing a thesis statement
HW: Write 300 words for Wed to show me with your thesis statement and outline

Friday, February 26, 2010

Fri, Feb 26, 2010

Fri, Feb 26, 2010

ALL CLASSES: AR DEADLINE MONDAY

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR rdg, log, and quizzes

Pd 2
1. Show me 600 words of your rough draft and your outline. 15 pts each. No more than one third (200 words)of your essay can be quotations.
HW: AR deadline Mon
HW: Mon Share essay for editing
HW: Tue Final draft, rough drafts, final outline, rough outline due (Use standard topic outline form & begin with your complete thesis). I, A, 1, a

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Begin planning Q3 essay: 500 word minimum with no more than one third quotations.
HW: Read essay ideas pp333-4 in textbook, Critical Responses #4-10. Choose one or write your own topic that is your arguable opinion about some aspect of the play. For example, what is Shakespeare’s central message (theme) and how does he achieve it? (literary elements) Write an outline of the body paragraphs. Show me rough thesis and outline Monday.

Thursday, February 25, 2010

Thu, Feb 25, 2010

Thu, Feb 25, 2010

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Read Conflict p 72- and do Writing Connection

Pd 2
1. Show me your standard format topic outline and 300 words of your essay 15 pts
2. Get study questions back
HW: Finish 600 words of rough draft
Mon: Edit drafts
Tue: Final draft, other drafts, final outline, rough outline due

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Mastery Test Act 1 Macbeth & check

Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Wed, Feb 24, 2010

Wed, Feb 24, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Any more essays?
3. Reading analysis practice

Pd 4
1. AR reading and log
2. Hand in essays & initial.
3. Read p 72 Reading Focus, Conflict through tragic flaw.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Check & discuss HW sheet
Macbeth mastery tests tomorrow

Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Tue, Feb 23, 2010

Tue, Feb 23, 2010
Pd 1
1. AR reading and log
2. Hand in essays & initial.
3. Read p 72 Reading Focus & Conflict.
Do Writing Connection and hand in.
Read Macbeth p 73, ¶s 1-2.

Pd 2 1. AR rdg & log
2. Thesis statement of theme:
Did you make it
• arguable and
• universal?
Did you remember the three easy steps to a thesis?
3. Handout 6 pp for help w/ essay
4. Take notes on last essay
5. MC 21-30 J.E. to you, check answers, & give back
6. Show me your 300 words or 14 parts to outline* (see sample outline below)
HW: Write 300 more words or the detailed outline, and show me everything you have so far.
*Thesis: Shakespeare's depiction of the significant women characters in Macbeth suggests that women are evil.
I. Weird sisters
_A. Words
__1. “toil and trouble”
__2. “He shall live a man forbid”
_B. Other characteristics
__1. Presented “killing swine”
__2. Presented as “having beards”
II. Lady Macbeth (done as above)

Monday, February 22, 2010

Mon, Feb 22, 2010

Mon, Feb 22, 2010

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading & log
2. Tomorrow after taking essays, we begin reading Macbeth. No use of computers during class after today.
3. Any essays ready? Need any help?
HW: Essay due next class.

Pd 2
1. Show me your 2 theme proposals with support. Choose one to use for your essay.
2. Essay Rubric handout
3. Essay will be 600 words min.
HW: Write a thesis statement that is arguable and universal. Either write 300 words or write a complete outline with evidence included for tomorrow. I will have more options and help for you tomorrow.


Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Hand in project
3. Get Macbeth outline handout
HW: Conflict & Characterization handout

Friday, February 19, 2010

Fri, Feb 19, 2010

Fri, Feb 19, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Comparison
3. Writing your outline
HW: Essay due Tues, Feb 23

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Work on essay or read AR book.
HW: Essay due Wed, Feb 24

Pd 2
1. Quiz chs 37-38
2. Multiple choice 21-30 J.E.
3. Get answers to check 37-38
4. Get information sheet for essay
5. Discuss essay
HW: Decide on a theme and explore ways to support it. Have proposals (supporting subtopics) for 2 different themes for Monday. Possible THEMES:
-inequality
-freedom and liberation
-hypocrisy
-duty
-appearance versus reality
-love and passion
- or your own idea
SUPPORT:
-characterization, the effect of characters on Jane;
-settings and lessons learned there;
-symbolism such as the Red Room, nature, or fire and ice;
-contrast between places or between people (foils?)

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Show me what you have so far on your project
3. Film to end
HW: Finish quotation project
HW: Test on Macbeth Monday

Thursday, February 18, 2010

Thu, Feb 18, 2010

Thu, Feb 18, 2010

Pd 4
1. AR reading and log
2. Show me your rough draft
3. Give me your documented sentence to check & return.
4. Work on essay
HW: Essay due Wed, Feb 24

Pd 2
1. AR rdg & log
2. Qz chps 33-36 & voc
3. Get answers to check 33-36
4. Get study qstns 37-38
5. Discuss chs 25-35 and terms: anaphora, polysyndeton, pathetic fallacy, bildungsroman
HW: Read chs 37-38 and answer study questions

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Get quotes back Acts 1-5
3. Film: Act 4
HW: Quotation/Art Display. Use one sheet of paper or two, but art must fill the page.
Have half by tomorrow.
• Write a Quotation from Macbeth in quotation marks & document.
List in dark, legible print:
Speaker: ___
Occasion: ___
Attitude: ___
Paraphrase: ___
Art: 3+ colors, contrast black & white, fill the page, no stick figures, use details, appropriate content (no clowns, cartoons)

Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Wed, Feb 17, 2010

Wed, Feb 17, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR reading and log
2. Show me your complete rough draft
3. Work on essay, edit rough draft & proofread
HW: Essay due Tues, Feb 23

Pd 4
1. AR reading & log
2. Show me the rest of your essay
3. Get back papers blending quote into your sentence. Document your quote with a parenthetical.
HW: Essay due Wed, Feb 24

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Read Act 5 aloud

Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Tue, Feb 16, 2010

Tue, Feb 16, 2010

Pd1
1. AR reading & log
2. Show me the rest of your essay for points.
3. Practice blending a quotation from the sonnets into your sentence and documenting it with the line number.

Pd 2
1. Qz J.E. chps 29-32
2. Hand in notes on thinking for qstns missed on MC 1-20.
3. Check Study Qstns chps 29-32
4. Checking will be given points. Give each answer a sign as follows: √ X NS (not sure)
5. Get study qstns chs 33-36
6. Discuss chs 21 – 24
7. Two new terms--
• bildungsroman: a type of novel concerned with the education, development, and maturing of a young protagonist.
• pathetic fallacy: A term coined by John Ruskin to deplore the tendency of certain writers and artists to ascribe human emotions and sympathies to nature, a technique used extensively in the late 18th and early 19th centuries by Wordsworth, Shelley, and other Romantic writers.
HW: Read chps 33-36 & answer study questions.

Thursday, February 11, 2010

Thu, Feb 11, 2010

Pd 2
1. Quiz chps 27-28
2. Practice Free Response Question 4
3. Pick up the following:
1] answers to study questions chs 27-28 to check
2] study questions chs 29-32
3] Mult choice 1-20 Answers to check your 2 quizzes returned.
HW: On binder paper write a short note about your thinking on each question you missed of 1-20 Jane Eyre Mult Choice. Include part of question.
HW: Read chs 29-32 & answer study questions

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Show me 200 total words due today.
3. Write a sentence blending the quote “only stand and wait” into it. Copy my blending of “late spring” for minimum points. Hand in.
HW: Write the rest of your rough draft due Wednesday, Feb 17. 300 words minimum 700 maximum Final Draft due Wednesday, Feb 24.
• Literary analysis is a formal paper.
• Do not use any slang words or informal speech such as contractions (don’t = do not)
• Write only about the poems, the author, and the ideas. Do not write about yourself, the reader, or what you are writing, except in personal comment at the end.
• Name the author and the sonnets.


Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Read Act 4 aloud.
3. Movie

Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Wed, Feb 10, 2010

Wed, Feb 10, 2010

1. AR rdg & log
2. Show me 200 total words due today.
HW: Show me the rest of your rough draft on Tuesday, Feb 16. 300 words minimum 700 maximum Final Draft due Tuesday, Feb 22.
• This is a formal paper.
• Do not use slang or conversational words such as guy for man or a lot for many or much. Don't use informal speech such as contractions (don’t = do not; they're = they are)
• Write only about the poems, the author, and the ideas. Do not write about yourself, the reader, or what you are writing.
• Name the author and the sonnet titles.

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Show me your 100 words and your chart with evidence.
3. Show me 100 more, 200 total, tomorrow.
Essay should be at least 300 words and no more than 700.
Answer these questions:
• What is the meaning of Milton’s two sonnets? To find it, do the following:
• Discuss the problem and solution. Use evidence and show how it supports your ideas.
• Analyze by comparing them. How are they alike and how are they different?
Final Draft due Wed, Feb 23.
4. Get progress reports.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Read aloud.
3. Watch play.
4. Get progress reports

Tuesday, February 09, 2010

Tue, Feb 9, 2010

Tue, Feb 9, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Show me your 100 words. I will check your chart with evidence tomorrow.
3. Show me 100 more words, 200 total, tomorrow.
Essay should be at least 300 words and no more than 700.
Answer the questions:
• What is the meaning of Milton’s two sonnets?
• Discuss the problem and solution. Use evidence to support your ideas about the meaning and explain your evidence.
• Analyze by comparing sonnets. How are they alike and how are they different?
4. Get progress reports

Pd 2
1. AR rdg & log
2. Qz J.E. chps 25-26
3. Mult Choice 11-20
4. Check study qstns 25-26
5. Get study qstns 27-28
HW: Read chs 27-28 & answer study qstns
6. Get progress reports.

Monday, February 08, 2010

Mon, Feb 8, 2010

Mon, Feb 8, 2010

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading & log
2. Get handout for essay writing
HW: Write 100 words of your rough draft for next class.
Essay should be at least 300 words and no more than 700.
Answer the questions: What is the meaning of Milton’s two sonnets? Analyze by comparing them. How are they alike and how are they different? Discuss the problem and solution and use evidence to support your ideas about the meaning. Evidence should be explained.

Pd2
1. Qz J.E. chps 22-24
2. Check Study Qstns chps 22-24
Hand in TP-CASTT if you haven't already.
3. Discuss ch 18-20 for points
4. New terms:
Anaphora: repeated words or phrases at the beginning of sentences or lines
Polysyndeton: single word repetition
HW: Read chps 25-26 & answer study questions.


Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Hand in quotes Acts 4 & 5
3. Quiz p 329 “Soliloquies and Asides”

Thursday, February 04, 2010

Thu, Feb 4, 2010

1. AR rdg & log
2. Show me your paraphrases.
3. Compare Milton’s 2 sonnets using a T chart. Analyze (look at a part to learn about the whole)
4. Examine the octave (problem section) of "Age 23". Write in your own way what you see as his problem. Then supply evidence from the poem to show why you see it that way. Do this for both poems.
5. For evidence, use direct quotes-- "my late spring" (4) -- or use indirect quotes-- He referred to his current age as being in the latter part of spring (4). Instead of documenting in parentheses, you can document within your text by saying "In line 4 Milton writes about his "late spring."
HW: Give the evidence for both poems

Pd 2
1. Quiz chps 20-21
2. Practice Free Response Qstn 1 J.E.
3. Check study qstns 20-21
4. Get study qstns 22-24
HW: Read chs 22-24 & answer study qstns
HW: Any more TP-CASTT?

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Read aloud from Act 3 up to scene 6 p 299
HW: Read “Soliloquies and Asides” p 329 for a quiz Monday
Hand in quotes Act 4&5

Wednesday, February 03, 2010

Wed, Feb 3, 2010

Wed, Feb 3, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Quiz on Age 23
3. Comparing Milton’s 2 sonnets with a T chart. Analyze (voc: look at a part to decide about the whole) parts of the 2 poems to understand Milton’s ideas.
4. Examine the octaves (problem section ) of both.
Hand in paraphrases for grade and get back for homework:
HW: Give the evidence for them

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Check paraphrase of “On His Having Arrived at the Age of 23”.
HW: Paraphrase “On His Blindness”

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Mult Choice AP Macbeth 1-10
3. Movie to end of Act 2
HW: I forgot to collect quotes for Acts 4 &5. Have them ready tomorrow.

Tuesday, February 02, 2010

Tue, Feb 2, 2010

Tue, Feb 2, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Check paraphrase of “On His Having Arrived at the Age of 23”.
HW: Paraphrase “On His Blindness”

Pd 2
1. AR rdg & log
2. Multiple Choice 1-10
3. Qz J.E. chps 18-19
4. Check study qstns 18-19
5. Discussion chs 14 & 15
HW: Read chps 20-21 and answer study questions
HW: Hand in TP-CASTT Thursday

Monday, February 01, 2010

Mon, Feb 1, 2010

Mon, Feb 1, 2010

Pd 1&4
1. AR reading & quizzes
2. Write paraphrase on handout of “ On His Having Arrived at the Age of Twenty-Three”
3. Finish for homework

Pd 2
1. AR quizzes
2. Qz J.E. chps 15-17
3. Check Study Qstns chps 15-17
4. Hand in TP-CASTT
5. Discuss ch 13 for points
HW: Read chps 18&19 & answer study questions.
HW: Finish TP-CASTT (see 1/28 for poem suggestions)

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and quizzes
2. Read aloud in circle Act 3
HW: Pick quote you like from Act 5, write, document, and give Speaker, Occasion, Attitude of speaker, and Paraphrase.

Thu, Jan 28, 2010

Thu, Jan 28, 2010

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading & new log
2. Discuss poem “ On His Having Arrived at the Age of Twenty-Three” & answer questions 1,2, 4, 5, 6 on handout. Homework for Pd4.
HW: Finish AR book for quiz Mon, Feb 1, deadline

Pd 2
1. Quiz chs 13 & 14
2. Check study qstns chs 13&14
3. TP-CASTT poetry analysis. Pick a poem you don’t understand well to analyze on a blank form. Suggested poems: p 638 Lucy poems, pp 710-11 Bright Star or When I Have Fears, p 1092 The Second Coming, p 1122 The Naming of Parts
HW: Read chps 15-17 and answer study questions
HW: Finish AR book for quiz Mon, Feb 1, deadline

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Hand in work on quotes for Acts1-3
3. Read aloud
HW: Act 4 quote w/5 parts as done previously
HW: Finish AR book for quiz Mon, Feb 1, deadline

Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Wed, Jan 27, 2010

Wed, Jan 27, 2010

Pds 1 & 4
1. Library 15 minutes AR rdg
2. Reread "On His Having Arrived at the Age of 23" p 63
3. Paraphrase and discuss comparison analysis essay

Pd 2
1. Library 15 minutes AR rdg
2. Quiz chps 11&12.
3. Check Study Qstns chps 11&12
4. Discuss Jane Eyre
HW: Read chps 13&14 and answer Study questions

Pd 6
1. Library 15 minutes AR rdg
2. Get handout: Macbeth Outline of acts & scenes
3. Read aloud
HW: Pick a quote you like from Act 3, write it, document it, and give Speaker, Occasion, Attitude of speaker, and Paraphrase
EXAMPLE
“And pity . . . shall blow the horrid deed in every eye.” (1.7.21-24)
Speaker: Macbeth speaking his thoughts aloud
Occasion: He’s deciding whether to kill the king.
Attitude: ? He doesn’t want to kill him.
Paraphrase: Everyone will feel bad for the murder.

Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Tue, Jan 26, 2010

Tue, Jan 26, 2010

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading & log
2. Finish discussing questions
3. Quiz “On His Blindness”
4. Read “On His Having Arrived at the Age of Twenty-Three.” p 63

Pd 2
1. Qz J.E. chps 6-10
2. Check Study Qstns chps 6-10
3. Discuss J.E.
4. Discuss Lucy poems, get TP-CCASTT handout to keep in binder
HW: Read chps 11&12 & answer study questions.
AR rdg tomorrow is postponed to Thursday during trip to library


Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Discuss essay in groups
3. Read quotes aloud
4. Read Act 2 aloud
HW: Pick good quote from Act 2, write, document, and give Speaker, Occasion (the situation), Attitude of speaker, and Paraphrase the quote (write in your own words). Go back and do this for the quote from Act 1.

Friday, January 22, 2010

Fri, Jan 22, 2010

Fri, Jan 22, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR reading & new log
2. Discuss qstns p 66 # 3, 7-10 "On His Blindness"

Pd 2
1. Discuss Jane Eyre study qstns in groups
2. Check answers
3. Hand in 9 essay scores
HW: Read chps 6-10 and answer study questions

Pd 4
1. AR reading and log
2. Finish paraphrase
3. Discuss qstns p 66 # 3, 7-10 "On His Blindness"

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Show me your chart/ outline
3. Read aloud Act 2 Scene 1
• HW: Write essay explaining how the contrast between Macbeth and Lady Macbeth in the first 30 lines of Act 1 Scene 5 foreshadows later interaction between the two.
In the first paragraph use quotes from scene 5 to illustrate the contrasting traits of character revealed for Macbeth and Lady Macbeth. In the next ¶, explain how this contrast reappears later.
• HW: Find a quote you like from Act 1, write it, and document it with act, scene, and line #s. E.g., (1.5.1-30)

Thursday, January 21, 2010

Thu, Jan 21, 2010

Thu, Jan 21, 2010

Pd 2
1. AR reading & log (not Jane Eyre)
2. Hand in Jane Eyre study questions.
3. Hand in essay scores if you got SS in place of WWW. All others get SS and revise scores without WWW.
4. Quiz Jane Eyre chps 1,2,3
5. Discuss Jane Eyre and Strange Fits of Passion
HW: Read chps 4&5 and answer Study questions
HW: See # 3 above

Pd 4
1. AR reading and log
2. Quiz on Sonnets
3. Paraphrase and discuss “On His Blindness.”

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Quiz Act 5 Macbeth
3. Movie to end of Act 1
HW: Carefully read p 265 lines 1-30 to write an essay that 1] compares the characters of Macbeth &Lady M using short quotes as evidence, and 2] Explaining how the contrast between Macbeth &Lady M foreshadows later action. Due tomorrow: a chart or outline of each character, your description (e.g., selfish), & quotes you base it on, & Name a later action (page & lines) that is foreshadowed by the contrast on p 265.

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Tue, Jan 19, 2010

Tue, Jan 19, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR reading & log
2. Notes on sonnets; Quiz tomorrow
3. Read “On His Blindness” aloud and discuss

Pd 2 See MESSAGE below HW
1. Get copy of Jane Eyre, reading schedule, and study questions for chps 1,2,3
2. Hand in qstns & Crit Resp. for Lucy, Bright Star, When I Have Fears.
3. Discuss Eros poems with handout of AP Exam essay prompt.
--HW: Read ~ 20 pp of Jane Eyre every day, according to chapters in the reading schedule. Answer study questions.
--HW: Score 9 essays (handout) on the Eros poems using the scoring guide. On paper, list each essay by letter(s), the score you give it, and the part of the scoring guide description that fits the essay;
e.g. RR, 7, reasonable comp/cont of concepts of Eros

•••••MESSAGE•••••
To have all scores, 1-9, replace essay WWW with the following essay SS: ( student errors are not corrected ) See me if you want a hard copy or print your own. This essay will be erased after class Thursday.

Robert Bridges intimately addresses Eros, the Greek god of love, in his poem “EPΩΣ” as he desperately pleads to discover the thoughts and intentions of the mysterious idol. Also describing the powerful god, Anne Stevenson offers a more modern view of love in “Eros,” a poem in which the god is not a mystery, but rather a worn, battered entity who must endure pain in order to maintain his valiant pursuit of love.

Bridges’ poem is very traditional, mirroring an analytical and ancient view of Eros. To begin with, the title of the poem is in Greek, suggesting that the contents of the poem will reflect Eros’ traditional role as well as an older perspective of the god. Furthermore, Eros is depicted as an elevated, admirable entity in parts of the poem. Bridges immediately presents the generally accepted view of Eros as the “idol of the human race.” However, Bridges creates this typical sense of praise so that he may emphasize his following questioning of Eros’ intentions.

It soon becomes clear that Bridges will not simply accept Eros as the perfect god of love. In fact, he is rather confrontational as he demands in the first line of the poem to know why Eros “hast nothing in [his] face.” The use of this abrupt, direct apostrophe proves that Bridges does not completely accept the traditional admiration of Eros. The face symbolizes Eros’ thought and innermost intentions as he deals with matters of love. Bridges continues to subtly allude to the fact that Eros may be, in part, malevolent. He contrasts the view of Eros as “the tyrant of the human heart” with the concept of the God as “the flower of lovely youth.” Clearly, “tyrant” has very negative connotations with regards to Eros’ actions, while “flower” has very positive connotations in reference to Eros’ appearance. The poet emphasizes Eros’ attractive, youthful appearance through vivid imagery and elevated diction. For example, the god has “exuberant flesh so fair,” dons “proud dress,” and is, in fact, so perfect in outward appearance that Bridges alludes the the Greek sculptor Pheidias, claiming that only a man-made object could compare.

Bridges creates a perfect image of Eros in order to contend that Eros’ thoughts, which should be of utmost importance, may not match this admirable image. Bridges’ tone becomes increasingly sarcastic and confrontational in the final two stanzas as he accuses Eros of failing to maintain good intentions at all times. He sardonically comments, “surely thy body is thy mind,” clearly not certain that Eros’ beautiful appearance reflects a beautiful heart. Bridges uses diction that connotes an ill-intentioned secrecy on Eros’ part, commenting on a “secret” smile that “shadows neither love nor guile.” By the last stanza, Bridges makes it clear that he knows that Eros is rash and thoughtless in his actions; he is much more blunt and accusatory, begging to know, “what is thy thought” and then answering his own question by stating that it is “nought.” He removes any doubt of his skepticism and accusation by ironically referring to a “victim” of Eros’ “grace.” Clearly, those who step in his path will be harmed rather than saved.

Although Stevenson also creates a poem in which the speaker communicates directly with Eros, it is very different in its modern praise. Stevenson’s poem is clearly contemporary, most obvious in its title (“Eros” rather than “EPΩΣ” and its colloquial diction. Stevenson praises, rather than condemning, Eros’ work. She also provides Eros’ point of view, as Bridges does not.

Stevenson presents the speaker more as a “damsel in distress” than the accusatory, skeptical, and very analytical speaker in “EPΩΣ” The first two lines are a plead for help from the benevolent Eros: “I call for love, but help me, who arrives?” Although she uses simple imagery to reflect on Eros” frightening appearance, she, unlike Bridges, has no problem with the way he looks. Although he is a “thug” with “boxer lips and patchy wings askew,” Stevenson’s playful, flirtatious, and admiring tone proves that she likes him just the way he is.

Eros then presents his own view; in this case, he is a hard-working defender of love rather than a corrupt, sneaky manipulator. Eros repeatedly says “you” and “your” to reveal that he and other gods only work at the demands of the people. He claims that he is “the archetype” that the speaker “create[s],” that his poor appearance is the result of “blows” the speaker’s “lust” has caused. The poem ends with a general moral, stating that it is better to be “bruised but hot” rather than let love “rot.”

While Bridges’ Eros is outwardly beautiful and inwardly ugly, Stevenson’s Eros is outwardly ugly and inwardly beautiful.

Thursday, January 14, 2010

Thu, Jan 14, 2010

Thu, Jan 14, 2010

Pd 4
1. AR reading & new log
2. Quiz on the Renaissance

Pd 2
1. Quiz on Don Juan
2. Hand in essays comparing epics
3. Read some aloud and discuss
4. Begin Jane Eyre next week
HW: Read the 3 Lucy poems, pp638-640, “Bright Star” p710, “When I Have Fears” p 711, answer all questions, and write Critical Response of at least 100 words for each of the three: Lucy, Star, Fears. Refer to p 604 for Romantic traits.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg, new log
2. Quiz Acts 1, 2, 3
3. Movie Scene 1: battle
HW: Read Act 4

Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Wed, Jan 13, 2010

Wed, Jan 13, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR reading& log
2. Quiz on the Renaissance
3. Notes on sonnets

Pd 4
1. AR reading, no log
2. The Renaissance (1300’s to early 1600’s)was the:
• ReBirth of interest & achievement in Science, Literature, & Art as people looked back to ancient classical works from civilizations of Rome and Greece
• Birth of 1] the Modern World,
2] Modern English, and 3] Humanism, the philosophy which taught that intelligence and imagination were gifts from God and humans had the obligation to use these gifts.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg, no log
2. Quiz Act 2 Macbeth
HW: Read Act 3

Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Tue, Jan 12, 2010

Tue, Jan 12, 2010

Pd 1
1. AR reading, no log
2. The Renaissance (1300’s to early 1600’s) was the:
• ReBirth of interest & achievement in Science, Literature, & Art as people looked back to ancient classical works from civilizations of Rome and Greece
• Birth of
1] the Modern World,
2] Modern English, and
3] Humanism, the philosophy which taught that" intelligence and imagination were gifts from God and humans had the obligation to use these gifts."
3. The SONNET is a major form of British poetry. An Italian named Petrarch invented the sonnet, a short poem with fourteen lines. Sonnets have a fixed rhythm and rhyme scheme that is followed precisely. The Petrarchan sonnet uses one octave (8 lines) and one sestet (6 lines). An English sonnet uses three quatrains (4 lines) and one couplet (two lines). The last part of a sonnet offers a solution, a reaction, or a conclusion to the first part. Sonnets present personal feelings and thoughts about life. Common subjects are love, grief, and relationships.

Pd 2
1. AR reading, no log
2. Hand in Tintern Abbey essay & definition of meditative poem.
3. Discuss
4. Read from Don Juan p684 aloud
HW: Finish Don Juan and write a 200 word Critical Response essay p690 with 2 quotes, comparing it to Rape of the Lock p533 using 2 of these elements : Verse forms, tones, use of irony, targets of satire
QUIZ on Don Juan Thursday
HW: Redo Tintern Abbey to 5 parts.

Monday, January 11, 2010

Mon, Jan 11, 2010

Mon, Jan 11, 2010

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading, no log
2. Quiz on Changes article
3. Discuss Renaissance as rebirth; also as birth of Modern English/World ( and Humanism philosophy in Pd 1 only )

Pd 2
1. Hand in Critical Response p 625 Chimney Sweeper poems
2. Class discussion of Blake’s poems for points.
HW: Read “Lines Composed … Tintern Abbey” pp 631-637. Do Critical Response p 637. In your brief essay, write one paragraph for each of the 5 verses. In each, tell what the speaker’s main thought is in that verse and comment on it, telling why it matters to him. There is no requirement for number of words.

Pd 6
1. AR reading, no log
2. Read aloud Act 1, scene 3
3. Discuss
HW: Read Act 2

Friday, January 08, 2010

Fri, Jan 8, 2010

Fri, Jan 8, 2010

Pds 1, 4
1. AR rdg and no log
2. Study Notes on “Changes” article for quiz Monday:
Two Parts of the Mind:
Emotion=====and=====Reason: They can be compared to
Elephant=====and=====Rider: They have
==\/====Good Traits====\/
Inspires=============Decides
Motivates============Plans
====\/===Bad Traits===\/
Wants it now=======Can't decide
-For a change in your life, you need both emotion and reason.
Q: Do you have Overwhelming Goals?
A: Do a little at a time. See your progress and gain hope.
3. Renaissance Period:
•ReBirth of
-interest & achievement in
-Literature, Science, & Art
•Birth of the Modern World
-------and Modern English


Pd 2
1. Hand in Critical Response "The Tyger"
2. Quiz Romantic Period: “Political and Economic Changes” and “The Term Romantic” pp 600-604 & “Blake’s Poems” p620
3. Speaker Oscar Chang
4. Class discussion of “The Tyger”
HW: Read the 2 Chimney Sweeper poems pp 623 & 625; Write Critical Response Analysis of at least 300 words.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and no log
2. Quiz on Act 1 Macbeth
3. Reading aloud to Act 1, scene 3, line 89

Thursday, January 07, 2010

Thu, Jan 7, 2010

Thu, Jan 7, 2010

Pd 1, 4
1. AR reading& log
2. Changes Quiz/Discuss
3. Grades

Pd 2
1. Hand in work on Rape
2. Hand in Macbeth essay
3. In class AP essay
4. Grades
HW: Read about the Romantic Period pp600-604; Read Blake’s Poems and “The Tyger” pp420-421; Write Critical Response 1 or 2

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and no log
2. Quiz on Globe & Shakespeare
3. Grades
HW: Read Macbeth Act 1 for quiz

Wednesday, January 06, 2010

Wed, Jan 6, 2010

Wed, Jan 6, 2010

Pd 1, 4, 6
1. AR reading& log
2. Sem Exams returned
Pd 4 Read aloud to “crystal-clear directions”
Pd 6: Quiz & check

Pd 2
1. AR rdg, no log
2. Quiz on Changes article, hand in change you want to make
3. Hand in train of thought analysis of poem
4. Sem Exams returned
5. Macbeth essay returned
HW: Read from Pope’s Rape of the Lock pp 532-5, Intro & Canto 1;
p541 answer # 1; write Creative Response

Tuesday, January 05, 2010

Tue, Jan 5, 2010

Tue, Jan 5

Pds 1, 4, 6
1. AR reading & No log
2. Get essays back
3. Fill out Essay Comment Response
4. Get article “Make Changes That Last”
Pd 1: Read and start taking notes on the sheet or paper. Hand in.
Pd 4: Read (not all finished)
Pd 6: Read for quiz Wed

Pd 2
1. HW handout: Pick one of the two poems. Analyze it informally using comments about your train of thought
2. Get college essays back
3. Fill out Essay Comment Response
4. Get article “Make Changes That Last” & read for quiz. Write (on the handout) some change you would like to try this with.

Monday, December 14, 2009

MON, DEC 14, 2009

MON, DEC 14, 2009

Pd 1
1. Semester 1 Exam
2. Writing about six Canterbury Tales due Thursday.

Pd 2
1. Hand in HW on Pope's Essay on Man
2. Semester 1 Exam

Pd 4
1. Review tales for writing about six Canterbury Tales due Thursday and for exam.

Sunday, December 13, 2009

SUN, DEC 13,2009

AP EXAM: FINAL COUNT OF QUESTIONS

Essay Writing 10
MLA Form 5
Conventions of Literary Analysis 5
Quotation Use in Literary Analysis 6
Elements of Style (from handout) 7
Literary Periods- Renaissance and Restoration 4
Author Matched to Work 7
Quotation Matched to Work 6
Author Matched to Life Fact 3
Six Traits of Writing 6
Literary Terms from Textbook 35

Thursday, December 10, 2009

THU, DEC 10, 2009

THU, DEC 10, 2009

Pd 2
1. Discuss satire. What words first alerted you to the satire in Modest Proposal?
Hand in work on couplets.
2. Quiz on Pope and works.
3. Review for exam.
HW: Why do you think Pope says the first two lines from Essay on Man, p 530?

Pd 4
1. AR reading& log
2. Write about tales
3. Review for exam

Pd 6
1. AR reading& log
2. Quiz on Renaissance drama and poetry
3. Review for exam

Wednesday, December 09, 2009

WED, DEC 9,2009

Pd 1
1. AR reading & log
2. Review Essay writing & Lit Pds
3. Write more about tales

Pd 4
1. AR reading & log
2. Write about tales
3. Review vocabulary for exam. Questions will be examples.

Pd 6
1. AR reading & log
2. Discuss notes & hand in
3. Quiz Renaissance Poetry
HW: Read Renaissance Drama pp 179-183. Concentrate on comprehension and/or take notes

Tuesday, December 08, 2009

TUE, DEC 8,2009

TUE, DEC 8,2009

Pd 1
1. AR reading& log
2. Write about tales from handout.
3. Exam review sheet

Pd 2
1. AR reading& log
2. Quiz on Growth of Modern English pp438
3. Discuss work p 444
4. Get review sheet for exam
5. Look at Macbeth response #5
1] Did they answer the question?
HW: Read Satire pp514-17. Read “A Modest Proposal” p 518-523 until you come to the words that make you realize that the author MUST be kidding. Make note.
HW: Read about Alexander Pope p525-6, & Heroic Couplets p527. Choose 2 that you are familiar with or that you like. Copy them and explain what they say in your own words. Read An Essay on Criticism and An Essay on Man for a quiz. See if you can answer the questions.
HW: Learn the elements of style of the Restoration p443 for quiz

Monday, December 07, 2009

MON, DEC 7, 2009

Pd 1
1. AR reading and QUIZ today
2. Write about tales from handout questions

Pd 4
1. AR reading and QUIZ today
2. Finish Franklin’s tale video, add him to list, & describe the tale. Hand in list.

Pd 2
1. Pass out books.
2. Hand in poem you found.
3. Hand in Response#5
4. Quiz Daniel Defoe and Robinson Crusoe
HW: Read pp 438-443 “The Growth of Modern English” for a quiz. You may need to take notes.
HW: On p444, do #1 and #3. For #1 you will need a print dictionary. For #3, make a T chart w/3 columns. The first column will be for the kind of differences to look for, the second for the 1st work, and the third for the 2nd work.

Pd 6
1. AR reading & quiz
2. Hand in facts about reading.
3. Hand in creative sentence: Time passed.
4. Quiz on the Renaissance pp166-175
HW: Read pp 176-179 Renaissance Poetry for quiz. Take notes on terms in bold print.

Thursday, December 03, 2009

THU, DEC 3, 2009

THU, DEC 3, 2009

Pd 2
1. Hand in Paradise Lost passage and the ages that appeal and don’t appeal.
2. Discuss Restoration: 3 ages: Dryden, Pope & Swift, & Johnson. Discuss each section of the reading.
3. Quiz: Restoration, 18th Century
4. Train of thought for “The Red Wheelbarrow.” Find a poem that you can think about this way.
HW: Find a short, confusing poem & bring to class
HW: Write a 40 minute essay for Free Response #5 for the Open Question on the AP exam. Take up to 10 minutes out of the 40 to plan first. (1]Answer question, 2]Pick strategies, 3]Find evidence for strategies.) Draw a line at end after 40 minutes, then keep writing if you wish on the other side of the line. Will be looked at by other students in class.
HW: Read pp 480-495 about Daniel Defoe and the selection from Robinson Crusoe for a quiz.


Pd 4
1. AR reading& log
2. Watch, write, & talk about Canterbury Tales. Write who told the tale & what happened in it.
4] Merchant
5] Pardoner
6] Franklin (not finished)

Pd 6
1. AR reading & log
2. Finish speeches
3. Creative writing sentences: "It fell to the floor." Write no more than 30 words. Vote 2 at a time.
HW: Read about the Renaissance pp 166-175. For each bold heading division write one interesting fact.
HW: Creative rewriting of this sentence: Time passed.

Wednesday, December 02, 2009

WED, DEC 2, 2009

WED, DEC 2, 2009

Pd 1
1. AR reading& log
2. Watch, write, & talk about Canterbury Tales. Write who told the tale & what happened in it.
5] Pardoner tells of 3 rioters who want to find & kill death. They find death when they kill each other from greed over money.
6] Franklin tells of a squire who loves a married lady and wins her, but he releases her because of guilt.
7: Who in the Franklin’s tale-- Squire, lady, knight, scholar-- is the most honorable? Explain.

Pd 4
1. AR reading& log
2. Watch, write, & talk about Canterbury Tales. Write who told the tale & what happened in it.
2] Discuss Knight’s tale of two knights who fight for the love of Emily.
3] Wife/Woman of Bath told of a knight who raped a virgin and was punished by being forced to marry an old woman who had magic powers.

Pd 6
1. AR reading& log
2. Speeches

Tuesday, December 01, 2009

TUE, DEC 1, 2009

TUE, DEC 1, 2009

Pd 1
1. AR reading& log
2. Watch, write, & talk about Canterbury Tales. Write who told the tale & what happened in it.
3] Wife/Woman of Bath told of a knight who raped a virgin and was punished by being forced to marry an old woman who had magic powers.
4] Merchant told of January, an old man who married a young virgin who cheated on him.

Pd 2
1. Pass out books
2. AR reading& log
3. Hand in Syntax answers
4. Discuss Paradise Lost reading
5. Quiz Temptation of Eve
HW: Write a phrase, line, or lines that you like from Paradise Lost, Temptation of Eve.
HW: Read pp 448-457 “The Restoration & the Eighteenth Century” for a quiz. Tell which of the 4 Ages appeals to you most, then tell why it appeals and why the others don’t.

Monday, November 30, 2009

MON, NOV 30, 2009

MON, NOV 30, 2009

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading & log
2. Make up work reminders: essays, Medieval Pd Quiz, Vocab Quiz, Silent Rdg at TASK tomorrow.
3. Watch animated Canterbury Tales
Make list of tales viewed:
1. Priest told tale of rooster who dreamed he was attacked by a fox.
2. Knight told tale of (pd 1 only)

Pd 2
1. "Rules of Usage" pretest & discuss: Part 1: apostrophe, comma, semi-colon, colon
HW: Read pp 420-433 for quiz--from Milton’s Paradise Lost: The Temptation of Eve
Answer #2 Syntax: a, b, & c only, in the second column of p 434

Pd 6
1. AR reading & log
2. Speeches require a card with
1] notes from outline of article and
2] article documentation or article itself
3. Speeches presented

WED, NOV 25. 2009

WED, NOV 25. 2009

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading & log
2. Quiz Medieval Pd.
3. Watch a Centerbury Tale (pd 1)

Pd 2
1. Hand in answer explanations sheet
2. Finish presentations
3. Sentence diagrams examples and quiz
HW: none

Pd 6
1. AR reading & log
2. Speeches: writing outline to get notes for index card
3. Rubric

Tuesday, November 24, 2009

TUE, NOV 24, 2009

TUE, NOV 24, 2009

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR rdg & log
Mastery Learning of the Medieval Period
Art: 3 columns, Draw & color
Corrective: Feudalism, Church, Town and related fact for each. Write and illustrate
Enrichment: Write 3 new facts about the Medieval Pd from silver book pp68-75 and illustrate.

Pd 2
1. AR rdg & log
2. Quiz on Bible, Milton, “On His Blindness”
3. Hand in homework qstns p417
4. Get multiple choice answers
HW: List the numbers you missed and tell why.
5. Continue presentations Macbeth

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Pg 147 “Romance” Read and outline for speech. Know main idea.
3. Get speech rubric.
HW: Prepare your speech presentation from outline and practice to present tomorrow.

Monday, November 23, 2009

MON, NOV 23, 2009

MON, NOV 23

Pd s 1 & 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Vocabulary Quiz 1-4, 7-10, 15

Pd 2
1. Quiz on parts of speech & Writing Tip.
2. Write answers to multiple choice test on answer sheet and hand in.
3. Hand in sentence diagrams & discuss
HW: Read for quiz
• pp 394-5 about the King James Bible
• pp 414-16 about John Milton
• p 417 “On His Blindness”
HW: Answer questions 4, 5, and 6 on p 417 in complete sentences

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Hand in speech topic and source
3. Speech:
1] Will have all the parts of an essay: Introduction, Body, Conclusion
2] Will be short, around 2 minutes
3] Will require note card(s) with outline of speech

Friday, November 20, 2009

THU, NOV 19, 2009

THU, NOV 19

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Write and discuss Essential Vocabulary 7-10 for a quiz Monday.
3. Period 1: Mastery Learning- Medieval Period. 80% is mastery.
••Corrective: Art: 3 columns, Draw & color Feudalism, Church, Town and one related fact for each.
Facts:
• The feudal state was based on possession of land. The king was the head of the hierarchy with knights, nobles, and lords as his vassals. Serfs were at the bottom of the system, growing crops and doing the bidding of their lords.
• The Roman Catholic Church unified most of the people of Europe in a common religious faith. It settled disputes among nobles. It was a center for learning. Monks copied, translated, and preserved manuscripts from ancient civilizations. It sponsored the Crusades to take the Holy Lands from the Moslems in the Middle East.
• Towns grew up on major trade routes which developed from the journeys of armies traveling to the Middle East. Serfs left the feudal state to work in the towns for themselves rather than their lords.
••Enrichment: Find 3 new facts about the Medieval Period from the reading on pp 68-75 in Elements of Literature. Is there a connection to the feudal state, the church, or the towns?

Pd 2
1. Hand in “Rules for Style” sheet.
2. Presentations for Macbeth
3. Grades for midquarter
HW: Pg 1273 in text, know the definitions of the 8 parts of speech , a phrase, a clause, and a sentence for a quiz. Look through the highlighted TIPS FOR WRITERS to find a tip you didn’t already know. Be ready to write it on the quiz.
HW: Read Diagramming Sentences handouts. Diagram 1-10 simple sentences. Then try 1-7 of the harder ones.
HW: Multiple Choice Practice Test I

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Voc Quiz 1-5, 7-10, 15
3. Speech on article: Find an interesting nonfiction article to present to the class in a short speech. Magazines and newspapers are good sources. The topic should be appropriate for the classroom. Topic is due Monday.

Wednesday, November 18, 2009

WED, NOV 18 , 2009

WED, NOV 18

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Hand in essays
• Final draft,
• Rough draft w/corrections in different color, 10 pts
• Outline 5 pts
3. Mastery Learning Medieval Period, Pd 1 only
Art: 3 columns, Draw & Color Corrective: Feudalism, Church, Town and related fact.

Pd 2
1. AR rdg & log
2. Hand in Donne:Creative or Critical Responses
Hand in Rdg Record Cards
3. Presentations on Macbeth
HW: Read handout on Style.
1] Write on the back of the “Rules for Style” sheet the 4 most important points for you from pp 66-69.
2] Write what you think is the most important sentence/idea/phrase from each section on the “Rules for Style” sheet.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Hand in essays
• Final draft,
• Rough draft w/corrections in different color, 10 pts
• Outline 5 pts
3. Vocabulary 7-10 learn definition
and review 1-4 & 15 for quiz

Monday, November 16, 2009

MON, NOV 16, 2009

MON, NOV 16

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Pd 1: Show me last 100 words or 1¶ for 10 points
Pd 4 : Café duty
DUE WED, NOV 18
• Final draft,
• Rough draft w/corrections in different color,
• Outline

Pd 2
1. Quiz Donne, "Metaphysical Poetry," 3 poems, and prose
2. Movie to end

HW: Do A or B below.
A. Write the 3 Creative Responses for “The Bait,” “Song,” and “A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning” from pp 364,365, & 367
B. For Meditation 17, answer questions 5, 6, and 7, all parts, and do the Critical Response p 369.

HW: Write on an index card on any size (but use the same size for all the cards you make) the information listed on the handout you picked up in class (and that is also given below Period 6) for Macbeth and for your summer novel. (I noticed an allusion to Roman generals dying on their swords at the end of the movie. That refers to Brutus and Cassius, who killed themselves after being defeated in battle by Octavius and Mark Anthony as depicted in Shakespeare’s Julius Caesar.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Show me 5 ¶s or 500 words. If you missed class Friday, show me 4 ¶s or 400 words and I’ll check the last 100 words of the rough draft when you turn in your final draft on Wednesday.
3. Peer editing. Have a student or someone else you trust edit your paper before you do your final draft. They need to sign in a different color & write these comments: + (good), ? (unclear), & more (needs more details), They also tell what your main idea is. You and your editor will get points.

Reading Record Cards

The purpose of this card is to keep fresh in your mind information about books you read recently so you can discuss them on the Open Question for the AP exam in May.

Use any size note card, but use the same size for all your books. If you don't have a card, do it on paper and then glue it to a card. Index cards are 3" x 5", 4 x 6, or 5 x 7. I have all sizes.

FORMAT:

1. Title of book
2. Author, Dates of birth and death, Where lived
3. Publication year of the book originally
4. Setting: Place, Time, Current events of that time and place
5. Plot synopsis in 25 words or so
6. Characters, with brief descriptions. Identify protagonist and antagonist.
7. A major symbol or allusion
symbol (something that stands for or suggests something larger and more complex)
allusion (an indirect reference to something in literature, the other arts, history, myths,
8. Distinguishing characteristics of the work (what is different about this work?)
9. Your personal response to the content and style of the work

Thursday, November 12, 2009

THU, NOV 12, 2009

THU, NOV 12

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. How to write Introduction ¶
3. Show me thesis and outline for 10 pts and 3 ¶s for 10 pts each
HW: Last 2 ¶s due tomorrow, Friday

Pd 2
1. Hand in Macbeth essay: Final draft, Rough draft w/editing corrections, outline, and 3 steps to write thesis
2. Watch Macbeth movie
3. Presentations handed in
HW: If you did not include your 3 steps to write your thesis with your final draft today, bring it in next class. Can’t find it? Rewrite it and hand it in.
HW: Read about John Donne p362-3 and Metaphysical Poetry p363; Read 3 poems, "The Bait" p364,"Song" p365, and “A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning” p 366-7. Write a favorite line and a line you don’t understand for each poem. Know the answers to the Identifying Details questions for a quiz. Read “Meditation 17” p 368. Know answers to Identifying Facts questions p 369 for a quiz.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. How to write a thesis
Pardoner evidence pp 104,122,129
Priest evidence pp 121, 117, lines 89-99 (no description in Prologue)
Literary Analysis Topics: Guidelines are given on the page for the Critical Response. Choose only one.
The Canterbury Tales: p 131 Critical Responses
2] Comparing Storytellers;
3] Evaluating the Tales as Short Stories;
4] Analyzing Character
"Sir Gawain and the Green Knight" p146 Critical Response:
3] Analyzing a Romance
3. Show me outline & thesis for 10pts and 200 words for 20 pts
HW: 200 more words (400 total so far) by Friday with 4 quotations circled in your ¶s.
HW: Mon show me all 5 ¶s

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

TUE, NOV 10, 2009

TUE, NOV 10

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Show me thesis and outline for 10 pts and100 words for 10 pts
HW: 200 more words (300 total) due Friday

Pd 2
1. AR rdg & log
2. Editing rough drafts
Peer editing required for credit with your rough draft:
1] Sign name or pen name
2] Mark with + ? more
in a different color
3] Tell what they think main idea is
HW: Final draft, rough draft with corrections, editing in different color, and outline DUE THU
HW: Presentations after movie THU

Monday, November 09, 2009

MON, NOV 9, 2009

MON, NOV 9

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & quizzes
2. Show me thesis & outline expos essay for 10 points
3. Write 100 words due tomorrow

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & quizzes
2. Show me thesis, outline, & one ¶
HW: Write 2 more ¶s for Thur

THESIS: Main idea + subtopic ideas
I learned _________ by/at/from/in (etc) _______, _______, &_______.

I learned about teaching ideas at the Moanalua Conference in an English session, a math session, and the general session.

OUTLINE OF BODY ¶ #1
I. English session
A. Teaching without teaching
B. Can I do it? My answer

Pd 2
1. AR quizzes
2. Quiz on terms
Peer editing
Mark: + ? more
Use a different color
& sign w/pen name
HW: Final draft, rough draft w/ editing, and outline due Thur. Editing tomorrow.
HW: Have presentation passage ready for end of movie.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and quizzes
2. Writing literary analysis: Body paragraphs
3. Show me outline & thesis
HW: Write 200 words by Thur

Literary Analysis

LITERARY ANALYSIS OF FLOWERS FOR ALGERNON BY DANIEL KEYES
Written as an example for sophomore English class

Use MLA format, not the format used here. Double space everything and indent paragraphs instead of using block form.



THESIS: Charlie’s entire life was lonely, not only when he was a child, but also when he worked at the bakery, and even after he became a genius.

OUTLINE:


Introduction Paragraph

1. Attention getting sentence
2. Complete THESIS


Body Paragraphs

I. As a child.

A. Other children
B. His family

II. Workers at the bakery

III. Relationships as a genius

A. Alice
B. Faye
C. Doctor's comments


Conclusion Paragraph:

1. THESIS restated in different words
2. Personal comment



Wilson 1


Pat Wilson
Mrs. Scanlon
English II Period 1
15 December 2003

Loneliness and Love

The average person would love to be a genius. Anyone might change his mind, however, after reading Flowers for Algernon by Daniel Keyes. The main character in this novel is a mentally retarded thirty-two-year-old man named Charlie Gordon. After having brain surgery as part of a scientific experiment, his thinking reaches genius level. His life, however, becomes worse instead of better because he cannot get along with other people. Charlie finds that the loneliness he suffered as a child and then as an adult continues and gets even worse after he becomes a genius.

The novel begins with Charlie recalling his childhood as an unhappy one, the beginning of his loneliness. He says no one would be his friend, that his schoolmates made fun of him and sometimes even beat him up. Although he had a family-- a mother, father, and sister, he still felt lonely and sad. His sister lied to her friends: “[Charlie] is not my real brother! He is just a boy we took in because we felt sorry for him” (83). His mother saw Charlie’s mental retardation as a sign that she herself was imperfect, and therefore could not accept Charlie or his handicap. At first she tried to improve his intelligence, but when her second child was born normal, Charlie’s mother gave up on him. She began to mistreat him by beating him for not controlling his bodily functions and then by favoring his sister. Finally she forced her husband to take Charlie to a mental institution.

The second phase of Charlie’s loneliness begins when Charlie grows to be a man, and gets a job cleaning at a bakery. Charlie treats his fellow workers like friends, even though they play tricks on him and laugh at him. He does not know that laughing at someone is different from laughing with them. Later he says he misses “all my friends and the fun we have” (15). But they are the kind of “friends” who get Charlie drunk, tell him to go around the corner to see if it is raining, and then leave. They are not his friends.

After Charlie has surgery on his brain, he expects his life to improve, but loneliness follows him even then. He thinks the other workers will be proud of him for being smart. But they do not know about the surgery, and instead of admiring him, they become hostile and ignore him because he makes them feel stupid. He says, “all of the pleasure is gone because the others resent me.” He is fired from his cleaning job, and even Alice Kinnian, his reading teacher and friend, becomes less friendly when his level of intelligence far exceeds hers. He meets Fay, a free-living artist, and has a relationship with her. Charlie says she is “what I need most of all right now. I’ve been starved for simple human contact” (148). She becomes the only person to keep him from being completely alone. Charlie realizes he was better off when he was retarded because at least then he was not smart enough to know that he had no friends. Charlie’s surgeon says Charlie has lost his faith in his fellow man. It is clear he has.

Charlie’s loneliness is extreme. From his experiences in childhood, to his job at the bakery, to his reincarnation as a genius, he suffers mightily from it. He finally declares that “intelligence and education that hasn’t been tempered by human affection isn’t worth a damn” (173). Soon he finds out that the surgery is wearing off and he will die. But before he deteriorates completely, Alice finds him and refuses to let him be alone. His loneliness is finally over, and Charlie recognizes that in the short time he has left, he and Alice will share more love than “most people find in a lifetime” (205).

641 words in 12 point Times New Roman

Thursday, November 05, 2009

THU, NOV 5, 2009

THU, NOV 5

Pd 2
1. Show me your 3 ¶s
2. Film
HW: Complete rough draft due Mon for peer editing
HW: Presentations begin when movie is done. Be ready. Give me a copy of your passage and have one for yourself.
HW: Literary Terms sheet for quiz Mon.

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Finish reviewing essay parts & take quiz
3. Check HW list of 5, hand in
4. Writing essay: outline & thesis

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Test on Medieval Pd, Chaucer, & the Canterbury Tales
3. Go over essay assignment.
HW: Write outline and thesis

Wednesday, November 04, 2009

WED, Nov 4, 2009

WED, Nov 4

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Review handout- Introduction to the Prologue to The Canterbury Tales
3. Quiz on the information reviewed
4. Discuss ¶s & their parts for a 5¶ essay
5. Discuss writing an expository essay about something you learned in the last year. Choose a topic from your brainstorming list or something else you think of. It could be anything in your life--school, job, family, hobbies, friends, experiences, yourself, etc.
HW: Write outline & thesis

Pd 4:
1. AR rdg & log
2. Review handout Introduction to Prologue to Canterbury Tales
3. Quiz on Canterbury Tales
4. Expository essay: Discuss the ¶s and their parts in a 5 ¶ essay.
HW: Write 5 things learned or experienced in the last year. It could be anything in your life--school, job, family, hobbies, friends, experiences, yourself, etc.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
Review for test on Chaucer and The Canterbury Tales.
* Feudalism & Knighthood pp69-70
* Chivalry & Courtly Love p71
* New City Classes p71
* The Crusades p72
* Chaucer :
p84, ¶3 and
p85, column 1, the last 3 ¶s beginning with “Most important…”
* Canterbury Tales p86
* Prologue, lines 1-102 and 122-166, the Knight, the Squire, and the Prioress (nun)
* Be familiar with details about
the Merchant- lines 280-294,
the Franklin- lines 341-370,
the Wife of Bath- lines 455-487,
the Pardoner- lines 689-734 p104, and
the Nun’s Priest- page 121.
* Know the story each one told.
3. Test tomorrow

Tuesday, November 03, 2009

TUE, Nov 3, 2009

TUE, Nov 3

Pd 1:
1. AR rdg & log
2. Check qstns Canterbury Tales
3. Quiz tomorrow on CT
4. Expository essay: Explain something learned in past year.

TUE Pd 2
1. AR rdg & log
2. Show me your outline or freewrite
3. Macbeth outline handout
4. Watch film
HW: 3 ¶s due Thur. on Macbeth essay.
Read handouts for literary analysis.

Monday, November 02, 2009

MON, NOV 2, 2009

MON, NOV 2

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Check HW
HW: Pd 1 Read about knight, squire, nun & answer remaining questions.

Pd 2
1. Check steps for 3 ideas for literary analysis essay on Macbeth.
2. Discuss Free Response #4: language & imagery, and hand in.
3. Presentations postponed
4. Film: Macbeth
HW: Write outline of supporting ideas and details for your Macbeth essay. OR freewrite 500 words exploring ideas for your topic & your outline for THU.
Due THU 3 ¶s of your rough draft
Due MON Complete rough draft
Due TUE Final draft, rough draft w/ corrections, outline, and thesis development

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Check & hand in HW: chart & 8 questions answered on story.
REVIEW for test on Chaucer and The Canterbury Tales as follows:
* Feudalism & Knighthood pp69-70
* Chivalry & Courtly Love p71
* New City Classes p71
* The Crusades p72
* Chaucer p84, ¶3 & p85, column 1, the last 3 ¶s “Most important…”
* Canterbury Tales p86
* Prologue, lines 1-102 and 122-166, the knight, the squire, and the prioress (nun)
* One distinctive detail about each of these pilgrims:
the Merchant lines280-294,
the Franklin lines341-370,
the Wife of Bath lines455-487,
the Pardoner lines 689-734 p104, and
the Nun’s Priest page 121.
* Know what story each one told.

Thursday, October 29, 2009

THU, OCT 29, 2009

THU, OCT 29

Pd 2 THU
1. Discuss Knocking article, favorite quotes, & free response qstns1&3
2. Discuss reading a play aloud
HW: 1] Select a passage of between 50 & 100 words from Macbeth to present to the class. 2] Begin by writing the speaker: ___, the occasion: ___, and the speaker’s tone: ___. 3] Type or handwrite the passage perfectly & legibly. To present: Read/Speak loudly, slowly, clearly, and with inflection. Stay in character. Inappropriate laughter will lower the score of the provoker and/or the laugher. You may work in a group, but only those who have 50 –100 words will be graded. Due Tuesday
HW: Use “How To Write a Thesis in 3 Easy Steps” for the upcoming literary analysis of Macbeth. Write three ideas from Macbeth that interest you. Do steps 1 & 2 for all. Do step 3 for the idea you want to try for your essay. Bring in to check on Monday.
HW: Free Response Essay #4 from handout is due Monday.

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Chaucer and The Canterbury Tales: Read Introduction to the Prologue from purple Reading Literature, discussing vocabulary.
3. Watch Nun’s Priest’s Tale.
HW: Furlough Friday: Read about 3 pilgrims and answer all the questions w/ complete sentences.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Past work on Medieval Pd returned for test review. Test on Wednesday.
HW: Use a T chart w/ Pilgrim Traits on the left and How Tale Fits Him on the right for the pilgrims whose tale we have read or seen. We did the Pardoner yesterday, and we finished the Knight in class today. Do the other four--Wife of Bath, Merchant, Franklin, Nun’s Priest--for Monday.
HW: Read EITHER The Nun’s Priest’s Tale on p 110, & answer qstns 1-8 OR read Sir Gawain & the Green Knight, p 133, & answer 8 qstns from Interpreting Meaning. Our essay will be a Critical Response (found at the end of the reading) for either the Canterbury Tales or Sir Gawain.

Wednesday, October 28, 2009

WED, OCT 28, 2009

WED, OCT 28

PD 1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Chaucer and The Canterbury Tales:
Read Introduction to the Prologue from purple Rdg Literature
HW: Furlough Friday
Answer qstns 1 & 2 about introduction. For the 3 pilgrims, find a descriptive phrase about each.

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. How to study-What is important?
3. Hand in notes on Medieval Per.
4. Quiz

Pd 6 WED
1. AR rdg and log
2. Finish discussing Pilgrims and their tales.
Pardoner
Knight
Wife of Bath
Franklin
Nun’s Priest
Merchant
3. Take notes

Tuesday, October 27, 2009

TUE, OCT 27, 2009

TUE, OCT 27

Pd 1
Mrs. Kau, college counselor
1. AR rdg & log
2. How to study-What is important?
3. Hand in notes on Medieval Per.
4. Quiz

Pd 2 TUE
Mrs. Kau, college counselor
1. AR rdg & log
2. Hand in blended sentences.
3. Quiz on handouts & discuss.
4. Discuss AR logs, books, days.
HW: Read pp 335-7 "On the Knocking at the Gate in Macbeth"
What is the author's thesis? What points does he make to support it? What does the bolded introduction do to help you understand? What is the tone? What do you think of De Quincey’s writing?
HW: Choose one short quotation that you like from each act of Macbeth, document with act.scene.line and page # as well as giving the speaker, the situation, and the tone.

Monday, October 26, 2009

MON, OCT 26, 2009

MON, OCT 26

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Finish notes on Medieval Pd
3. Quiz on feudal system
4. Quiz tomorrow on Medieval Period

Pd 4
Mrs. Kau, college counselor presentation
1. AR rdg & log
2. Hand in homework Prologue or Chaucer
3. Take notes on Medieval Pd
HW: Finish notes for Medieval Pd for quiz

Pd 2
1. Hand in
* HW 1: Qtr 1 exam answer sheet,
MC explanation for answers, &
Essay score based on rubric with comments on why you think you would get that score. Quote what you did well.
*HW 2: Rubric you wrote for Macbeth Free Response #1 or 3
*HW 3: AP exam-style essay Macbeth Free Response # 3
2. Handouts: 4 pages on 2 sheets
• How To Quote from Shakespeare,
• Notes on Macbeth,
• How to Make a Thesis in 3 Easy Steps,
• How to Quote w/ Sophistication
HW: Read for quiz or writing response
HW: Choose a short quote and a long (= or > 4 lines) quotation from Macbeth. For each quotation write a sentence and blend the quotation into it. Example: First Macduff calls Macbeth a “Hellhound,” and then he sends Macbeth to Hell.
3. Check more MC qstns 1-25 for Macbeth

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Hand in HW:
• character + tale,
• Imagery 1-4 pg 131, and
• handout-Characterization
3. Discuss char + tale, writing an essay of literary analysis, Romance and Sir Gawain and the Green Knight
-Pardoner-vulgar, low class, dishonest
-Wife of Bath: Likes marriage, men
-Knight
-Franklin
-Nun’s Priest
-Merchant

Thursday, October 22, 2009

THU, OCT 22, 2009

THU, OCT 22: Includes Furlough Friday assignments

Pd 2
1. AR rdg in the library
2. Hand in HW. Keep essay prompt.
3. Drill instruction
4. Quiz on last 7 terms p1272
5. Look at multiple choice answers and discuss MC instruction on Macbeth MC #s 1-20
HW: For the Qtr 1 exam, figure out why you missed the ones you missed, and tell why on a separate sheet. For the essay, tell what score you think you got and why. For the qualities you find in your essay that affected your score, give a textual reference (quote yourself)
HW: For the Macbeth essay, write a rubric description for an 8-9 score in the style of the BBP rubric
HW: Macbeth FreeResponse Qstn 3

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Take notes on Medieval Period
HW: Choose one, due Monday:
• In your own words (paraphrase), tell what is happening in the first 10 lines of the Prologue to the Canterbury Tales.
• Find some interesting facts about Geoffrey Chaucer online, copy the page, and present your facts to the class orally.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Hand in writing on Nun’s Priest’s Tale and Homework p 121
3. Finish Knight’s Tale. Which knight deserved Emily and why?
4. Watch Wife of Bath’s Tale. How was the consequence of the crime appropriate? What other events fit the character of the crime?
HW: Characterization handout for Canterbury Tales Prologue
HW: Find the description of the teller of each tale. What is Chaucer’s overall impression of him/her? How does the story he/she tells fit with that impression? Give at least three examples supporting your answer to each question.
HW: Pg 131: Imagery-Answer 1-4

Wednesday, October 21, 2009

WED, OCT 21, 2009

WED, OCT 21

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR rdg & log; Pd 4 Library
2. Take notes on Medieval Pd
Pd 1 up to Towns ¶ #1 Development: 2 details
Pd 4 up to Feudal System
3. Will take Quiz when finished
4. Pd 4 Drill instruction

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log in Library
2. Watch Nun’s Priest’s Tale, write what happened, and write 100 words on what you think the moral(s) is(are).
HW: Read p 121 and answer qstn # 7, both parts.
3. Drill instruction

Tuesday, October 20, 2009

TUE, OCT 20, 2009

TUE, OCT 20

Pd 1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Read and take notes on the Medieval Period

Pd 2
1. Quiz on terms Q-S
2. Return MOA forms
3. Finish notes Blackberry rubric 9-8
4. Get in groups to discuss scores for Blackberry essays
HW: Last 7 terms p 1272.
HW: Multiple choice for Macbeth
HW: AP exam style essay for Macbeth

Monday, October 19, 2009

MON, OCT 19, 2009

MON, OCT 19

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Check qstns "Seafarer"
3. “Seafarer” quiz Period 1 only

Pd 2
1. MAO sheets to sign and return
2. Hand in evaluation sheets for Blackberry essays
3. Get back essay O evaluation w/rubric
4. Rubric analysis: what makes a top essay? Overall view, Task, Options, Top qualities. Find each part in rubric.
HW: Study terms Q-S for quiz. Omit rhyme, setting, simile, sonnet, Spenserian stanza, and suspense.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Watch and write about the Franklin’s Tale. Besides general notes on teller and plot, write 100 words giving your opinion about who of the four characters (knight, lady, squire, scholar) you think is the most noble and why.
3 tales so far: Merchant, Pardoner, Franklin

Friday, October 16, 2009

FRI, OCT 16, 2009

FRI, OCT 16

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading & log
2. Check Seafarer qstns & hand in
3. Get essays back
4. Make notes “Essay Comments” listing College/Application Essay, Strongest trait, Weakest trait, and Other for things you need to correct on the next essay. Hand in essay and notes.

Pd 2
1. Discuss rubric for AP exam essays, your list of qualities for a top essay, and what words in the “O” essay illustrated each quality. Hand in.
HW: Evaluate Blackberry essays based on the rubric from yesterday’s handout. Comment to explain why you rated it as you did.

Pd 6
1. AR reading & log
2. Check the 50 words for the Merchant’s tale. You may write about the next tale on the same paper.
3. Watch tales, write
• who told the tale and
• what happened. Eventually we will make connections between the tale and the pilgrim telling the tale.
4. Write 100 words comparing the Merchant’s tale to the Pardoner’s tale, what is similar and what is different.

Thursday, October 15, 2009

THU, OCT 15, 2009

THU, OCT 15

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading & log
2.
pd 1 Check "Seafarer" questions
pd 4 Finish questions. Pick up handout to take home.

Pd 2
1. Hand in college essays , all drafts
2. Quiz Act 5 Macbeth
3. Hand in synopses
4. Discuss grades
HW:
1) From "Blackberry Picking" handout, make a list of qualities that describe a top-rated essay on the AP exam.
2) Find an example from essay O in handout that illustrates each quality

Pd 6
1. AR reading & log
2. Check and discuss answers to "Edward, Edward"
3. Watch Canterbury Tale (unfinished)
HW: Write 50 words on what you think about the tale

Wednesday, October 14, 2009

WED, OCT 14, 2009

WED, OCT 14

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading & log
2. Get grades for Qtr 1

Pd 2
1. Reminder of HW due tomorrow:
• Final draft & rough drafts for college essay (pg 3 of handout for polishing)
• Read Macbeth Act V & write scene synopses for quiz.
2. Get grades for Qtr 1

Pd 6
1. AR reading & log
2. Get grades for Qtr 1

FRI, OCT 2, 2009

FRI, OCT 2

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading & log
2. Finish qstns 1-10 p 51 and hand in
3. Write a response: Tell which story you prefered, Beowulf or The Seafarer in a paragraph. Give as many reasons as you can.
4. Discuss possible answers p 51, #1-10

Pd 2
1. AR rdg and log
2. Hand in synopses
3. Quiz Act 4
4. Discuss summaries and questions on pp 315-316 and hand in
3. Multiple choice questions for Macbeth

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Turn in Canterbury Art
3. Read “Edward Edward” pp148-149 in purple books by windows.
4. Answer qstns 1-10 and 1-5 p150

Thursday, October 01, 2009

THU, OCT 1, 2009

THU, OCT 1

Pd 1
1. AR rdg and log
2. Read “The Seafarer” p 49-51
3. Answer qstns 1-10 p 51 and hand in

Pd 2
1. AR rdg and log
2. Read Macbeth aloud to p 262 line 144
HW: Read Act 4 and do scene synopses
HW: Summarize “The King’s Evil” and “Hecate” p315. See the following site for information on how to summarize an article:
www.class.uidaho.edu/adv_tech_wrt/resources/general/how_to_summarize.htm (from the University of Idaho)
HW: Answer questions 9&10 p 316
HW: Polish your final draft (pg 3) by 2nd day back., Thur, Oct 15
HW: Read Macbeth Act V and write scene synopses. Due 2nd day back

Pd 6
1. Exam
2. Work on art project due Friday
3. Read AR book

Wednesday, September 30, 2009

WED, SEP 30, 2009

WED, SEP 30

Pd 4
Quarter 1 Exam

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2 Discuss review sheet for exam

TUES, SEP 29, 2009

TUES, SEP 29

Pd 1
Quarter 1 Exam

Pd 2
Quarter 1 Exam
HW: Read Act 4 and write synopses for scenes. Due Friday

Pd 4
1. AR rdg and log
2. Read “The Seafarer” p 49-51
3. Answer qstns 1-10 p 51 and hand in

MON, SEP 28, 2009

MON, SEP 28

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR reading and logs
2. Review sheet to study for exam
3. Makeup art & new quarter 2 AR log

Pd 2
1. Edit each other’s rough drafts by writing “Edited by_____” at the top in a different color. Write + for good, ? for don’t understand, and “more” for parts that need specific details or that the editor is interested in reading more about.
Hand in drafts.
HW: Read Act 4 and write synopses for scenes. Due Friday

Pd 6
1. AR reading and logs
2. Hand in homework
3. Canterbury Art Project
•Pick a pilgrim from pp 95-103.
•Write details about him or her from story. Document pg & line #s.Ex: (p103 l265)
•Draw the pilgrim based on descriptive quotations (no stick figures) and write quotations near the art
Materials:
- 1 sheet unlined paper 8&1/2 by 11 in
- 3 colors minimum
Requirements:
1) Find a pilgrim from pp 95-103
2) Write who it is in big, dark letters across the top of the paper
3) Draw a picture of the pilgrim described, using details given in the Prologue (no stick figures)
4) Add quotations to the drawing that describe the pilgrim
5) Make the art fill the space
6) Show effort by using details
7) Use contrast from black to white

Sunday, September 27, 2009

FRI, SEP 25, 2009

FRI, SEP 25

Pds 1& 4
1. AR reading & new logs
2. Get exam topics for review from front board
3. Finish art and hand in

Pd 2
1. AR reading & new logs
2. Quiz Act 3 Macbeth
3. Hand in synopses for Act 3 scenes
HW: Write first draft college essay.
The title is your Approach,
tell Stylistic Device used, and
write which General idea is the most important to you.


Pd 6
1. AR reading & new logs
2. Quiz on “The Pardoner’s Tale”
HW: Read pp 95-103 For each pilgrim write one trait that shows whether Chaucer paints an honorable or dishonorable picture of him or her.
Example: The nun: She is dishonorable because she swears “By Saint Loy.” (from an earlier page)

Thursday, September 24, 2009

THU, SEP 24, 2009

THU, SEP 24

Pd 2
1. AR rdg & log
2. Quiz Act 2 Macbeth
3. Check questions p 271 & 284
HW: Rd Act 3, do scene synopses. Due tomorrow.
HW: Read from college essay handout pp 3-4: Some Common Approaches, Stylistic Devices, and General ideas. Write a first draft, using your approach as your title. Also tell what Stylistic Device you use and what General idea is important to you.
Due Monday

Pd 4
1. AR rdg & log
2. Vocabulary 3 & 4, THESIS & THEME. Study, review 1&2, practice quiz 1-4.
3. Beowulf art
• Materials:
- 1 sheet unlined paper
- 3 colors minimum
- “Grendel” handout
• Requirements:
1) Find a quotation from “Grendel.”
2) Write the quotation in big, dark letters with quotation marks across the top of the paper, with chapter# in parentheses.
Example: "A powerful monster, living down in the darkness" (1)
3) Draw a picture of the image described (no stick figures).
4) Make the art fill the space.
5) Show effort by using details.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & log
2. Quiz on pp 91-95: the Nun, the Monk, and the Friar
3. Read aloud pp 87-88 in Middle English, 103 the Summoner in modern English
HW: Read p104 about the Pardoner, then “The Pardoner’s Tale” pp 122-129 for quiz.

Wednesday, September 23, 2009

WED, SEP 23, 2009

WED, SEP 23, 2009

Pd1
1. AR rdg & log
2. Vocabulary 3 & 4: Study, review 1&2, take practice quiz.
THESIS: a statement to be supported
THEME: the meaning, the message, the main idea
3. Beowulf art
• Materials:
- 1 sheet unlined paper
- 3 colors minimum
- “Grendel” handout
• Requirements:
1) Find a quotation from “Grendel.”
2) Write the quotation in big, dark letters with quotation marks across the top of the paper.
3) Draw a picture of the image described (no stick figures).
4) Make the art fill the space.
5) Show effort by using details.

Pd 4
1. AR rdg, log
2. Check questions p 10
3. Test on Beowulf

Pd 6
1. AR rdg, log
2. Quiz pp 89-91 "General Prologue" from The Canterbury Tales
HW: Read pp 91-95 (lines 121-279)

Tuesday, September 22, 2009

TUE, SEP 22, 2009

TUE, SEP 22

Pd 1
1. AR rdg, log
2. Check questions p 10
3. Test on Beowulf

Pd 2
1. Quiz on article p 253 and Act I of Macbeth.
2. Hand in scene synopses
3. Check MC
4. Read aloud Act 1 scene 7 and get handout.
HW: Answer questions 12,13 p 271
HW: Read Act II. Write a one- sentence synopsis of each scene. Answer questions 1,11,12,16,17 p 284

Monday, September 21, 2009

MON, SEP 21, 2009

MON, SEP 21

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR rdg, log, and quiz
2. Finish questions 1-10 for Beowulf p 10 in Globe (or get a handout of the questions).

Pd 2
1. AR rdg, log, and quiz
2. Quiz on Shakespeare p247-252
HW: Read “Macbeth” p 253 and Macbeth Act I. Write a 1 sentence synopsis of each scene. Quiz

Pd 6
1. AR rdg, log, and quiz
2. Check notes on Chaucer & the Canterbury Tales. (9 notes)
3. Quiz on topics in #2 above
HW: Read lines 1-42 p 89 carefully for a detailed quiz: who, what, where, when, why, etc.
HW: Read lines 43-121 p 89-91 to recognize traits of the 3 pilgrims described

Friday, September 18, 2009

FRI, SEPT 18, 2009

FRI, SEPT 18

Pds 1 &4
1. AR reading and log, teacher initial
Pd 1 Finish reading Beowulf and answer qstns p 10
Pd 4 Quiz:Beowulf & answer qstns1-4 &6

Pd 2:
1. AR reading and log, teacher initial
2. Quiz pp241-6, Renaissance Theater
3. Hand in notes: College & Renaissance Theater
4. Check MC
HW: Read William Shakespeare pp 247- 252 for quiz. Pay attention to facts new to you. Quiz Mon
HW: for Tue, Read “Macbeth” p 253 and Macbeth Act I. Write a 1 sentence synopsis of each scene. Quiz Tues

Pd 6
1. AR reading and log, teacher initial
2. Quiz on Middle Ages pp 68-75
3. Check notes & hand in.
HW: Geoffrey Chaucer pp 84-85. Take 3 notes each on 1) his life and 2) the Canterbury Tales. Read p 86. Take one note per ¶.

Thursday, September 17, 2009

THU, SEPT 17, 2009

THU, SEPT 17

Pd 2
1. AR rdg and log. Bring the book you are reading for AR to class before you take the quiz. Deadline for the quiz is Mon 9/21.
2. Quiz: sonnets + Shakespeare’s Sonnets pp 338-346.
3. Hand in work on the 6 sonnets.
4. Check MC quizzes and hand in.
HW: College essay. Read page 1 of the handout “It's Not a Pain, It's an Opportunity,” and annotate on the page in pencil. Do 9 of the 10 activities on p 2 for "Getting Started, Brainstorming," in ink on a sheet of paper.
HW: Read pp 241-246, "Renaissance Theater," noting facts that are new to you. Quiz Friday.

Pd 4
1. AR rdg and log.
2. Review Beowulf using handout to annotate (make notes).
HW: Finish reading the handout of Grendel from Beowulf for quiz Fri.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log.
2. Quiz on Eng Lang pp 59-65.
3. Discussion on writing a summary.
HW: Read pp 68-75. Make a note of one idea for every Red and Black bold heading (11 of them) Enjoy reading the details, but make the note a summary of the information in that section.

Wednesday, September 16, 2009

WED, SEPT 16, 2009

WED, SEPT 16

Pd 1
1. AR rdg and log
2. Review Beowulf w/Think Aloud using handout to make notes

Pd 4
1. AR rdg and log
2. Essential Vocabulary #s 1 & 2
•Figurative: imaginative, fanciful, metaphorical; not literal
•Literal: actual, factual, to the letter
3. Read Beowulf aloud pp 4-5

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Quiz on “The Seafarer”
3. Check qstns 1, 6, 7
4. Reading analysis assessment
HW: Read “The English Language” pp 59-65 for quiz

Tuesday, September 15, 2009

TUE, SEPT 15, 2009

TUE, SEPT 15

Pd 1
1. AR rdg and log
2. Essential Vocabulary #s 1 & 2
•Figurative: imaginative, fanciful, metaphorical, not literal
•Literal: actual, factual, to the letter
3. Read Beowulf aloud pp 4-8

Pd 2
1. Terms quiz
2. Hand in essay on three carpe diem poems
3. Multiple choice practice with two poems
HW: Read introduction & Shakespeare’s sonnets pp338-346, give the main idea of each sonnet, choose your favorite, say what quality you like about it, and give evidence. Quiz Thur on all.
HW: Finish the MC questions

Monday, September 14, 2009

MON, SEPT 14, 2009

MON, SEPT 14

Pds 1& 4
1. AR rdg and log
2. Quiz on Anglo-Saxon Period

Pd 2
1. Quiz on terms
2. Hand in work on poems 3. Sonnets/handouts TPCASTT, tone, analyzing words, poetry categories
HW: p 437 Critical Response: Make the list and write the essay.
HW: terms K, L, the first 5 P words

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Hand in essays on Beowulf
3. Get back college essays and discuss.
HW: Read “The Seafarer” p46-51 for quiz. Answer questions 1, 6, 7. pg51

Friday, September 11, 2009

FRI, SEPT 11, 2009

FRI, SEPT 11, 2009

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR rdg & library visit
2. Any more essays?
3. Notes on Anglo Saxon Period p 2 Gold textbook for quiz Monday:
"Life in Early Britain: Warfare & Conquest"
1) Celts: the first people found to be living on the British Isles.
2) Romans: invaded & built towns but went back to Rome when it was being attacked.
3) Anglo-Saxons: invaded and the country became Angloland , then England
4) Danes: a Viking people, conquered a large area in central Britain.
5) Normans: from France, conquered and united the country into one kingdom.

Pd 2 AP
1. AR rdg 10 minutes
2. Hand in responses to poems.
3. Quiz on terms.
HW: Read “To the Virgins” p385 Write theme & supporting evidence.
HW: Read “To His Coy Mistress” p 436. Briefly restate qstns 1-7 and give the answers. Which line of the poem is unclear and which is your favorite? HW: Terms F, H, I & A-E

Pd 6
1. AR rdg & library visit
2. Show me your main idea, supporting subtopics (outline) and the first 100 words of your essay.
Our library has a graphic novel of Beowulf.

Thursday, September 10, 2009

THU, SEPT 10, 2009

THU, SEPT 10, 2009

Pd 2
1. AR rdg 10 minutes
2. Check & hand in stream of consciousness thinking for “The Virgins” p1137.
3. Write Critical Response p 1137 and hand in.
4. Handout STAR reports
5. Vote on Shakespeare play
HW: Terms C, D, & E for quiz. SEE BELOW FOR THE LIST TO STUDY.
HW: Read The Passionate Shepherd p 232 & The Nymph’s Reply p 234. Do Creative Response AND Critical Response p 234.

Pd 4
1. AR silent reading 10 minutes and log
2. Get STAR reports and write ZPD range in planner
3. The Anglo Saxon Period: Begin notes.

Pd 6
1. AR rdg and log
2. Quiz Anglo-Saxon Period
3. Read Beowulf aloud
HW: Write thesis (main idea) for essay from p 39 Critical Response #2 Grendel or #3 The Epic ( Christian or pagan?).
Outline (list) 2 or 3 supporting subtopic ideas or facts
I.
II.
III.
Write at least 100 words of the essay tonight.
Essay will be due Monday and need at least 300 words.

TERMS FOR AP QUIZ: C, D, E
CAESURA A pause in a line of poetry dictated by natural speaking rhythm
CANTO A subdivision in a long poem, comparable to a chapter in a book.
COMEDY In general, a story that ends happily.
CONCEIT An elaborate and often surprising comparison between two apparently highly dissimilar things
CONNOTATIONS All the meanings, associations, or emotions that a word suggests.
CONSONANCE The repetition of final consonant sounds after different vowel sounds (made/ wood)
COUPLET Two consecutive lines of poetry that rhyme
DENOTATION The dictionary definition of a word
DENOUEMENT The resolution or unraveling of mysteries after the climax in a plot
DEUS EX MACHINA Any artificial device used at the end of a plot to resolve the conflict
DIALECT A way of speaking that is characteristic of a particular region or group of people
DICTION A writer's or speaker's choice of words
DISSONANCE A harsh discordant combination of sounds
ELEGY A poem that mourns the death of a person or the loss of something
EPIC A long narrative poem that relates the great deeds of a larger-than-life hero who embodies the values of a particular society.
EPITHET An adjective or other descriptive phrase that is regularly used to characterize a person, place, or thing.
ESSAY A short piece of nonfiction prose that examines a single subject from a limited point of view.

Wednesday, September 09, 2009

WED, SEPT 9, 2009

WED, SEPT 9, 2009

Pd 1
1. AR silent reading 10 minutes & log
2. Discuss the Anglo Saxon Period p2 in Gold book.
We study the history of Britain because it is the home of our language.
Take notes titled Early British History: War and Conquest
1) Celts= the first type of people living in Britain when written history began.

Pd 4
1. AR silent reading 10 minutes & log
2. Hand in college essays:
• Final draft,
• Rough Draft w/corrections in a different color,
• FreeWrite,
• Outline of 3 body paragraphs

Pd 6
1. AR silent reading 10 minutes & log
2. Anglo Saxon Period quiz for review
3. Put AR reading range in planner
4. Look for evidence for essay topics (Grendel and religions) as we read Beowulf tomorrow

Tuesday, September 08, 2009

TUE, SEPT 8, 2009

TUE, SEPT 8

Pd 1
1. AR silent reading 10 minutes
2. Hand in college essays: Final Draft, RoughDraft w/corrections in a different color, Free-Write, and Outline of body paragraphs
3. PreTest Reading Analysis

Pd 2
1. Discuss & Quiz on A & B terms
2. Stream-of-consciousness thinking about a poem p 1128-9, “Refusal to Mourn the Death, by Fire, of a Child in London”
HW: Write down your Stream-of-consciousness thinking about “The Virgins” p 1137

Friday, September 04, 2009

FRI, SEPT 4, 2009

FRI, SEPT 4

Pds 1 & 4
1. AR/SRFing & makeup STAR
2. Work on essays FINAL DRAFTS
3. Grades
HW: Due Tuesday pd 1
Due Wed pd 4

Pd 2
1. AR/SRFing
2. Hand in art for FQ
3. Quiz on FQ
4. Grades
HW: Learn Literary terms A’s &B’s on pp 1259-60 for a quiz where you give the definition. Read the explanation to help you understand and remember the term.

Pd 6
1. AR/SRFing
2. Review Anglo-Saxon Pd (notes)

Thursday, September 03, 2009

THU, SEPT 3, 2009

THU, SEPT 3, 2009

Pd 2
1. AR rdg/SRFg
2. Quiz: Spenser; Sonnets 30& 75; p200
2. Hand in passage-analysis essays
3. Paraphrase Faerie Queene in class
HW: Read from The Faerie Queene pp 201-210 for brief quiz
HW: Read the bold-print introduction on p201.
• Do a story board of the events described in the second column of the bold-print introduction.
• Use 4 sheets of unlined paper to
1) draw the events and
2) write the 6 sentence(s) being illustrated at the bottom of the drawings.
• Label all characters with their names and what they stand for, if anything. ( Truth, Falsehood, and Pride)
ART TECHNIQUES
Use at least 3 colors (minimum)
Use contrast (black & white)
Fill the page
Don’t use stick figures.

Pd 4
1. STAR test in Mac Lab
2. Show me 300 words total minimum for your college/application essay.
3. Start typing your FINAL DRAFT and write your OUTLINE. due Wed 9/9 Along with rough draft with corrections in a different color, free-write, and outline of your ¶s

Pd 6
1. AR rdg/SRFg
2. Check body ¶s
3. Discuss writing literary analysis essay
4. Handout: "Loneliness & Love"
5. Read Beowulf aloud and discuss pp 14-24
Grendel is unhappy with the songs of men singing of the creation of Earth.
At night he goes to Herot Hall and attacks Hrothgar's men, who are sleeping there after drinking mead.
He kills 30 men and carries their bodies home to his lair.
After 12 years of Grendel's horror, Beowulf hears of Herot's grief.
Beowulf takes 14 of his bravest warriors and they sail to Denmark and Herot.
Beowulf introduces himself to King Hrothgar, and one of the king's men calls him a boastful fool.
Beowulf tells all the men the details of his mighty deeds, and Queen Welthow is pleased and welcomes him and his men.
HW: none

Wednesday, September 02, 2009

WED, SEPT 2, 2009

WED, SEP 2, 2009

Pd 1
1. Show me 300 words total, minimum, for your college/application essay.
2. Start typing your FINAL DRAFT and write your OUTLINE. due9/8 w/RD & corrections in different color and your free-write

Pd 4
1. Work on rough draft. Show me your first 200 words by the end of class today.
2. Next 100 words due by end of class Thur.
3. AR logs
Final draft due Wednesday, Sept 9
Also: Rough draft with corrections in a different color, Free-write, and Outline of your ¶s

Pd 6
1. AR logs
2. Discuss Beowulf and the Critical Response (check HW) p39 #2 or #3
3. Handouts for literary analysis
4. STAR test in Mac Lab
HW: Read handouts
HW: Write first draft of one Body paragraph, due Thurs.

Tuesday, September 01, 2009

TUE, SEP 1, 2009

TUE, SEP 1, 2009

Pd 1
1. Work on rough draft. Show me your first 200 words by the end of class.
2. Next 100 words due by end of the next class.
3. Fill out name and file AR logs.
Due Tuesday, Sept 8:
• Final draft
Also include:
• Rough draft with corrections in a different color,
• Free-write, and
• Outline of your paragraphs

Pd 2
STAR test today
1. Show me your 3 ¶s in your final draft.
2. Read & write a summary p 200.
HW. Read Spenser pp198-99 and Sonnets 30 & 75 from Amoretti pp212&13 for a quiz. If you feel you don’t understand something, study/engage your mind by either taking notes, summarizing, or answering the questions.

Monday, August 31, 2009

MON, AUG 31, 2009

MON, AUG 31, 2009

Pds 1 & 4
1. Show me your 300-500 word free-write
2. Write rough draft of college/application essay.
200 words due by end of next class.
Next 100 with 300 minimum words due by end of class after next.
Final draft due Tuesday, Sept 8.

Pd 2
1. Check passages 4 & 5 analyses and introduction & conclusion ¶s in rough draft. (6 parts)
2. Share essay for editing. Sign near owner’s name in different color.
3. Advice on literary analysis. Pick up a set of handouts after school.
HW: Start writing the final draft of the analysis of your summer book. Have 3 of the 7 paragraphs done for Tue. Passages must be included. Completed final draft with rough draft is due Thursday.

Pd 6
1. Quiz Beowulf pp30-38 & 2 articles: Mark of Cain & Comment on the Epic
2. Hand in time lines
HW: p39 Critical Response #1 or #2. Pick one and plan by finding 2 pieces of evidence.

Sunday, August 30, 2009

E-mailing your essay

Students,

The only word processing program my computers can read is Microsoft Word, any edition, or Pages. If you do not have either one of those, you must copy the essay, paste it into an email, and send.

Thursday, August 27, 2009

THU, AUG 27, 2009

THU, AUG 27, 2009

Pd4
1. College/Application Essay handout
2. Free write at least 300 to 500 words about an experience you had and what you learned from it. If you like the results, use the best parts for your essay. If you don’t, write about a different experience & what you learned.

Pd 2
1. Check summaries
2. Check passages 2 & 3 analyses
3. Discuss "gift from God" analysis: symbol & inference
HW: Due Mon: Copy & analyze Passages 4 & 5. Write intro ¶ and conclusion ¶. Look at the “Essay Analysis Form” sheet, front and back, for expectations about writing literary analysis essays.

Pd 6
1. Qz :Beowulf parts1-10.
2. Discuss imagery, allusions, symbolism (evil-what is it?), Christian and pagan elements (animism and Norse myths), source of the story and author’s nationality and faith.
HW: Read Beowulf pp 30-38 & 2 articles: The Mark of Cain & Comment on the Epic

Wednesday, August 26, 2009

WED, AUG 26, 2009

WED, AUG 26, 2009

Pd 1
1. Take STAR in Mac Lab
2. College/application essay. Free-write at least 300 words about an experience. Write in ink, double space. Purpose is to get ideas & details to use in your essay.

Pd 4
1. Hand in HW art or poem
2. College/application essay; Read 2 essays, from Tina and Molly; Read from” Getting In” p 10

Pd 6
1. Check notes on pp 2-9 in textbook
2. Quiz
3. Read Beowulf aloud p14
HW: Read parts 1-10 for quiz
HW: Finish timeline for tomorrow

Tuesday, August 25, 2009

TUE, AUG 25, 2009

TUE, AUG 25, 2009

Pd 1
1. Hand in homework corrections and enrichment
2. Review drills
3. College/Application essays
Read 2, from Tina and Molly
Read from ”Getting In” p 10

Pd 2
1. Quiz on Poetry & Drama to p 183
2. Check summer book essay. Underline literary terms. Keep to hand in with complete draft.
3. Discuss questions from "gift from God" analysis: tone and what words create the tone
HW: Read Renaissance Prose and Decline 184-186 and write a summary of both. Look for ideas, not details; for the Main idea and supporting ideas.
HW: due Thur: Two more passages analyzed (= 3 so far) Use literary terms that you recognize evidence of in a passage.
Due Mon: all 5 passages analyzed and introduction and conclusion ¶s, in a rough draft. Keep essay rubric in mind.

Monday, August 24, 2009

MON, AUG 24, 2009

MON, AUG 24, 2009

Pds 1&4
1. Check questions p 496
2. Correctives & enrichment for 4 kinds writing.
Corrective: Use art and definition to illustrate the kinds you missed.
Enrichment: Write a poem to illustrate the 4 kinds of writing however you wish.
NARRATIVE: tells a story
DESCRIPTIVE: describes using the senses (5: sight, sound, smell, touch, taste)
EXPOSITORY: explains or exposes facts
PERSUASIVE: persuades with 1) an opinion & 2) supporting facts

Pd 2
1. Hand in notes
2. Quiz: Raleigh, Nature, p 191 sonnet or p 193 meter
3. Handouts on essay grading & summer book assignment. Discuss.
HW: Read Renaissance Poetry & Drama pp 176-183
HW: Begin “Literary Analysis of Summer Novel” by choosing, copying, and analyzing the first passage for tomorrow.

Pd 6
1. Hand in college essay final draft, rough draft w/ corrections in different color, and 5 part outline
HW: Read pp 2-9, take Cornell notes w/bold headings on left and 2 most important details on the right for each
For details, do not use more than 5 words in a row for a note. e.g. "note <6 wrds "
HW: Draw a timeline (horizontally on binder paper or on computer) for the years on the chart on p 11. One space=50 years. Label the events.
TIMELINE INFORMATION
The red margin line on the back of a sheet is good to use for the line.
Write year # in margin & event on other side of line, for example
Example: 300BC| Celts called Brythons occupied the islands
Use one space for 50 years. You will need 26 spaces for all 1300 years.
The first mark on the left (start) should be marked 300 BC. Count down to 0 by 50s, then up to 1000 AD by 50s.
BC means Before Christ (new name is BCE, meaning Before the Common Era).
AD means Anno Domini, Latin for "In the year of our Lord." To remember what it means some call it After Death (of Christ).

Thursday, August 20, 2009

THU, AUG 20,2009

THU, AUG 20,2009

Pd 2
1. Quizzes on homework reading
2. Discuss analysis of the passage about Mr. Earnshaw and the child he brings home.
HW: Read “Sir Walter Raleigh” p194 and “Nature, That Washed Her Hands in Milk” p195. Take Cornell notes, as you think necessary, for both, to hand in and to help you study for the quizzes. Also, read and study Sonnets p191 or Meter p193

Pd 4
1. Quiz on 4 kinds of writing:
Descriptive: describes using the five senses
Narrative: tells a story or tells what happened
Expository: explains or "exposes" facts
Persuasive (Argumentative): persuades with an opinion and support
2. Finish reading from Face to Face.
3. Answer questions p 496 and hand in

Pd 6
1. Share examples of essays w/ class
2. Exchange essay with a partner. Use your handout to find at least one strength and one weakness, preferably more. Exchange with someone else to see if they agree or not.
Due Mon: Final drafts, Rough draft w/corrections in different color, Outline

Wednesday, August 19, 2009

WED, AUG 19, 2009

WED, AUG 19

Pd 1
1. Quiz on 4 kinds of writing
2. Finish reading from Face to Face.
3. Answer 10 questions p 496 and hand in

Pd 4
1. Check 6 Traits quiz
2. Notes on 4 Kinds of Writing
3. Nonfiction p 484-5 for the 4 kinds of writing. Read from Face to Face by Ved Mehta aloud p 486-490, discussing exposition and the point when the story becomes more interesting

Pd 6
1. Check what writing you have done on your essay so far. none!
2. Discuss riding bicycle downhill experience.
HW: Completed rough draft due tomorrow w/ 5 part outline.
Example:
Introduction: Interesting & related to bike
I. My bike
II. Falling
III. Learning independence
Conclusion: Relating specific bike incident to general idea on independence without being predictable!